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DragonNinja Moderator
Number of posts : 353 Age : 34 Location : Watching you secretly while you sleep Fav. Anime : Fate Stay Night is still up there, Vampire Knight, and Claymore is still there too Registration date : 2007-07-21
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| Subject: A poem Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:44 am | |
| I actually don't remember if I ever posted this here or not... Some of you know that I like to write poetry, most of you dont, but here is one that I wrote... The Beat In this world, after a time there becomes a feeling of inevitability and inescapability there is a rhythm a steady beat like a heart THUMPTHUMP THUMPTHUMP and people get caught up consumed by this rhythm they become accustomed to it begin to expect it come to anticipate it it is the rhythm of the same the very essence of predictability where there are no corners to not see around no hidden windows no trap doors people expect the expected in every aspect of themselves what they eat, see, experience even the people they meet they expect nothing new everything old and every now and then a person meets a person that shakes them to their core to the very heart of the rhythm to which they have become accustomed that they have lived by forever and at first there is no change no break in monotonous rhythm but then ever so slighly THUMPTHUMP THUMPTHUMP thump a tremor a break a murmur that screams out of the heart begging to be let out pleading, but whispering ever so softly "There must be more than this!" louder and louder and LOUDER it fills your heart, your head, your whole body and soul like a song you cant shake a saying you cant forget the whisper becomes a murmur then a voice a yell a scream until there is no more rhythm no more set pattern no more control life becomes what you make what you live it how you feel it something so slight as meeting someone can alter destiny save or ruin your life or awaken it from its morose slumber and it all starts with a whisper "There must be more than this." | |
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ally18 Anime know-it-all
Number of posts : 690 Age : 33 Location : IL Fav. Anime : naruto,Bleach,Fullmetal Alchemist,Wolf's Rain,Death Note and InuYahsa Registration date : 2007-08-04
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| Subject: Re: A poem Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:55 am | |
| i really like it i really like this part "something so slight as meeting someone can alter destiny save or ruin your life"
cus it's soo true for me | |
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KissedInuyasha Werewolf Clan ~member~
Number of posts : 987 Age : 34 Location : Seoul, South Korea. ^O^ Fav. Anime : Inuyasha, LoveCom, Karin Registration date : 2007-08-06
Custom Character Sheet Name: Eun Hye Weapon: Words Health: (4500/5000)
| Subject: Re: A poem Thu Aug 28, 2008 9:52 pm | |
| Nice, you're posting again. I haven't wrote in a while. Mostly because my muse is being uninspiring atm. | |
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DragonNinja Moderator
Number of posts : 353 Age : 34 Location : Watching you secretly while you sleep Fav. Anime : Fate Stay Night is still up there, Vampire Knight, and Claymore is still there too Registration date : 2007-07-21
Custom Character Sheet Name: Kasaguri Weapon: Sythe Health: (50/50)
| Subject: Re: A poem Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:31 pm | |
| This took me three months to write =_= Im not much of a writer anymore... | |
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ally18 Anime know-it-all
Number of posts : 690 Age : 33 Location : IL Fav. Anime : naruto,Bleach,Fullmetal Alchemist,Wolf's Rain,Death Note and InuYahsa Registration date : 2007-08-04
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| Subject: Re: A poem Fri Sep 19, 2008 11:02 pm | |
| i like it ,why do u say ur not a writer anymore. | |
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DragonNinja Moderator
Number of posts : 353 Age : 34 Location : Watching you secretly while you sleep Fav. Anime : Fate Stay Night is still up there, Vampire Knight, and Claymore is still there too Registration date : 2007-07-21
Custom Character Sheet Name: Kasaguri Weapon: Sythe Health: (50/50)
| Subject: Re: A poem Tue Oct 07, 2008 10:29 am | |
| Wow...late reply sorry. Well, I cant really think of stuff to write anymore...so Im not much of a writer... | |
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Dark SK Admin
Number of posts : 1127 Age : 32 Location : MD Fav. Anime : BLEACH DUH, naruto and deathnote Registration date : 2007-08-14
Custom Character Sheet Name: Aaron Smith Weapon: Black Sword, White Sword, 50 Cal. with scope, 44 magnum. Health: (5000000/5000000)
| Subject: Re: A poem Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:56 pm | |
| but yet you still wrote stuff so does that still mean you are a writer or what? | |
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BLAZE Admin
Number of posts : 268 Age : 33 Location : OC North Wales Fav. Anime : Bleach and Elfen Lied Registration date : 2007-07-25
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| Subject: Re: A poem Wed Oct 08, 2008 10:33 am | |
| very nice but this is my favorite poem
My First Time
The sky was dark The moon was high All alone Just her and I Her hair so soft Her eyes so blue I knew just what She wanted to do Her skin so soft Her legs so fine I ran my fingers Down her spine I didn't know how But I tried my best To place my hand On her breasts I remember my fear My fast beating heart But slowly she spread Her legs apart And when she did it I felt no shame All at once The white stuff came At last it's finished It's all over now My first time Milking a COW! | |
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Dark SK Admin
Number of posts : 1127 Age : 32 Location : MD Fav. Anime : BLEACH DUH, naruto and deathnote Registration date : 2007-08-14
Custom Character Sheet Name: Aaron Smith Weapon: Black Sword, White Sword, 50 Cal. with scope, 44 magnum. Health: (5000000/5000000)
| Subject: Re: A poem Wed Oct 08, 2008 5:32 pm | |
| wow dude that is umm different lol | |
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ally18 Anime know-it-all
Number of posts : 690 Age : 33 Location : IL Fav. Anime : naruto,Bleach,Fullmetal Alchemist,Wolf's Rain,Death Note and InuYahsa Registration date : 2007-08-04
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| Subject: Re: A poem Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:16 am | |
| LOL that was funnnny. i liked the first couple of lines, then it went a little too much info.lol | |
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Dark SK Admin
Number of posts : 1127 Age : 32 Location : MD Fav. Anime : BLEACH DUH, naruto and deathnote Registration date : 2007-08-14
Custom Character Sheet Name: Aaron Smith Weapon: Black Sword, White Sword, 50 Cal. with scope, 44 magnum. Health: (5000000/5000000)
| Subject: Re: A poem Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:49 am | |
| yea it was kinda weird then said milking a cow i was like what? lol | |
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ally18 Anime know-it-all
Number of posts : 690 Age : 33 Location : IL Fav. Anime : naruto,Bleach,Fullmetal Alchemist,Wolf's Rain,Death Note and InuYahsa Registration date : 2007-08-04
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| Subject: Re: A poem Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:19 pm | |
| - BLAZE wrote:
- very nice but this is my favorite poem
My First Time
The sky was dark The moon was high All alone Just her and I Her hair so soft Her eyes so blue I knew just what She wanted to do Her skin so soft Her legs so fine I ran my fingers Down her spine I didn't know how But I tried my best To place my hand On her breasts I remember my fear My fast beating heart But slowly she spread Her legs apart And when she did it I felt no shame All at once The white stuff came At last it's finished It's all over now My first time Milking a COW! was this for school or just for fun.? | |
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